Weavers At The Black

Words of Power

11th Apr 2016, 12:00 AM

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(T) on 11th Apr 2016, 9:42 AM

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I like the rune(?) in the 6th panel.

Looks like a strong spell if people can see it from far away

ReroOnyx on 13th Apr 2016, 6:03 PM

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Honestly, the fact that apparently you created completely original sprites is something to be proud of. It's not something you see often with a sprite comic.

Personally I'm not sure if I've ever seen one of such sort (though admittedly I don't read much sprite comics) but more often than not its always pre-made sprites from another site.

So good job there.

My only real concern I think right now is just the fact that its a bit difficult to read the text. While I think its design is something that looks like it would belong in the comic, its something I personally find difficult to read. May just be me though.

Regardless of that though, good job, keep it up.

Pip on 14th Apr 2016, 12:08 AM

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Thanks, that is very helpful feedback. A few people on reddit had commented that the text was hard to read, but I wasn't sure how big of a problem it was. The fact that you brought it up as well tells me that it should be a high priority to fix though.

(My rule is that if I hear the same criticism independently three or more times, then I should strongly consider making a change.)

So there will probably be a font redesign before too long, maybe higher resolution than it is now.

BTW, you comic is amazing.

haleakala on 15th Dec 2016, 10:25 PM

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someone just got cooked.

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