Nice, I like the interaction in the close-ups. That give more depth about the situation and more variety in reaction.
The armor or robe of the stranger in the 4th oanel could use some shade to give perspective (like a bit of shadow close to the line to show superposition)otherwise it's look a bit flat.
Nonetheless it's get better and better. I'm still amaze of your background! Really great Pixel art
That's right, so be quiet and listen up. Danger is about and you need to know about it!
Pixel Art is still great as always. I know I haven't gotten around to commenting much on your story but don't worry, I'm checking it out each time you post a new page.
On May 23, 2016, I came back and fixed an error in the text in panel #3. It feels slightly dishonest not to inform people when I retcon the comic like this, so I like to let people know, even if nobody cares.
Pip on 5th May 2016, 6:46 AM
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Anyway, I hope you guys like it. After this I will be returning to the usual Monday Friday update schedule, as long as I don't screw it up again :D